Rough Draft:
Even though , My main opinion of this topic is that he was an influencial leader, and a strong factor as an activist because The creation of his own organizaton, and his examples of leadership and My strongest arguments is that his work with The Nation Of Islam, also his departure, from the organization.
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Even though, Malcolm X had an troubled life style at an early, and many people against his beliefs, he became mature as an adult, and had gotten involved, in many civil rights organizations, also contributing to this nation's history by becoming an international speaker for the Nation Of Islam, and later on becoming a figure in many lives.
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This is a good start. Your sentence is too long. It is a run-on sentence. You need to break it up. Make the occasion -who he is - one sentence. Then make your position another sentence.
Grade: Satisfactory
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